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Marcia Abboud's avatar

Haha, donned in fig leaves. I can see that for you, Jozef 🤍

Your narration is superb!

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Khrystyna Catalina's avatar

ooooo i love this one

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Nancy Santos's avatar

““You wish,” said the serpent, laughing.”

Love this unexpected ending. 🤣

Great opening stanza too, Jozef!

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Debdutta Pal's avatar

I hate oats, but I'll take an apple if you're offering it.

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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

You remain both unpredictable and ever-fantastical, Jozef. I will never tire of reading your words and listening to your tales.

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

What a fever dream lol

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Just Kayla's avatar

This was quite the dream... and harsh waking up. Can we go back to the dream?

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Samantha Lazar's avatar

Ha ha! Love thisssssssss 💥🐍

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

A meta-yet-metered delight, what a fucking star you are, Joziah ^_^.

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Ute Luppertz's avatar

Wow! Love it 🐍

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