- Aesthete angles of the bespoken (I initially read it as 'bespoke boy', which seemed equally apropos) boy's angular face (Care to share his jaw-sculpting instruments & routine?).
- Pillowy sky brush (I love this conceit - the corporeal takes on cosmic proportions).
- Sable hour (Animalized & primal but contiguous to civilization, to ameliorated rhapsodies).
I think you ought to have congress with these two men: Richie Hofmann ('A Hundred Lovers' - poetry collection) and Daniel Mendelsohn ('The Elusive Embrace: Desire and the Riddle of Identity' - part auto-ethnography, part academic disquisition). Enjoy!
The way you sped up the "tell me you love me in tempo" during the reading was satisfying AF. This reading felt way more rhythmically intentional than usual. Pacing the love and lust, spiraling into oneness. Has to be one of my personal favourites of yours so far. Alaska must be out to lunch.
So many powerful lines it was near impossible to pick, but this one stood out. You are unmatched, Ser Edward. Your rhythm, cadence, linguistic talent, sex appeal - the full package.
Speaking of ethereal euphonies, this one was euphonic from start to finish! 😊
There’s gotta’ be rhythm to lovemaking, dear Mark 🔥🔥😂😂
Such lush offerings:
- Aesthete angles of the bespoken (I initially read it as 'bespoke boy', which seemed equally apropos) boy's angular face (Care to share his jaw-sculpting instruments & routine?).
- Pillowy sky brush (I love this conceit - the corporeal takes on cosmic proportions).
- Sable hour (Animalized & primal but contiguous to civilization, to ameliorated rhapsodies).
I think you ought to have congress with these two men: Richie Hofmann ('A Hundred Lovers' - poetry collection) and Daniel Mendelsohn ('The Elusive Embrace: Desire and the Riddle of Identity' - part auto-ethnography, part academic disquisition). Enjoy!
It was originally “bespoke boy” and then I changed it, so kudos to you.
The midnight hour is the primal hour! I’m familiar with Mendehlson, I shall suss out your other suggestion!
The way you sped up the "tell me you love me in tempo" during the reading was satisfying AF. This reading felt way more rhythmically intentional than usual. Pacing the love and lust, spiraling into oneness. Has to be one of my personal favourites of yours so far. Alaska must be out to lunch.
Yeah, very intentional with the pacing. Rhythm of sex needs to translate to the page!
Absolutely adore this. <3
Thanking youuuu 🥰🥰
Edward, perfect, beautiful, desire filled! I love this poem ❤️
It’s more of a sexy, racy poem, but I guess there’s love for a midnight minute 🖤🖤🥰🥰🔥
You never fail to touch and shift something within my core 🖤
There’s always more at the core 🖤🖤🖤
Absolute perfection and the style is impeccable Edward. Keep wowing me every single time and maybe I'll fall ☺️
In love with me??? 🥹🥹🥹 SHUCKS, I better get my pen out!
Listening to this I can only imagine the devastation you cause on the unsuspecting.
Us gays dahling, they suspect (and inspect) everything 🖤
WONDERFUL
Thank you so much, Khrystyna!
| Tell | Me | You | Love | Me | In | Tempo |
Back arched, tilt-chin inclined, ineffable
This is (is this) affirmation?
Perfection. Formatting God.
It’s a bit racy, but we all do it 💅💅💅.
Thank you! I think you format better than I.
Not speaking. Just listening.
🥹🥹 I’ve been so god damn busy lately, I need my Debdutta fix when I finish work 🌪🌪
"I reach beyond your sinewy shape to rewind
A forever nocturne space"
So many powerful lines it was near impossible to pick, but this one stood out. You are unmatched, Ser Edward. Your rhythm, cadence, linguistic talent, sex appeal - the full package.
Look, I agree.
Here’s a gold star ⭐️