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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

"I reach beyond your sinewy shape to rewind

A forever nocturne space"

So many powerful lines it was near impossible to pick, but this one stood out. You are unmatched, Ser Edward. Your rhythm, cadence, linguistic talent, sex appeal - the full package.

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Annie Lure's avatar

Such lush offerings:

- Aesthete angles of the bespoken (I initially read it as 'bespoke boy', which seemed equally apropos) boy's angular face (Care to share his jaw-sculpting instruments & routine?).

- Pillowy sky brush (I love this conceit - the corporeal takes on cosmic proportions).

- Sable hour (Animalized & primal but contiguous to civilization, to ameliorated rhapsodies).

I think you ought to have congress with these two men: Richie Hofmann ('A Hundred Lovers' - poetry collection) and Daniel Mendelsohn ('The Elusive Embrace: Desire and the Riddle of Identity' - part auto-ethnography, part academic disquisition). Enjoy!

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