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Simon Fulford's avatar

Wow.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Thanks. 😊

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Debdutta Pal's avatar

I'm going to keep this tab open for 24 hrs. Must send a message to the Universe.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Loud and proud, sister! 😁

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Don’t forget the tissues on the bench and to DELETE THE BROWSING HISTORY.

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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

Just wow. I like that these two were very different in style, and in presentation, but produced the same feelings (for me, at least). Linda you captured so many emotions in one piece. Edward, I’ve been there. Not sure if I’m ashamed or oddly proud of that 😂

Fantastic pieces, both of you. I need some holy water now.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words! Very sweet of you! Thanks so much!😁

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Wait, you looked at gay porn?!

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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

Can’t say I haven’t explored the internet, but ya know as soon as I commented “i’ve been there” I realised not directly 😄 You probably explored a lot further than I 😂 But I wouldn’t be ashamed of that! Some of what I did watch, however, and the age I watched it at, I have some shame for 😂

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

I had no internet. I was born well before its time. There was only so much I could do with a typewriter. 😜

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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

(.)(.)

Spicy stuff 🌶️🔥😂

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

LOL!!!😂

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Just Kayla's avatar

Wow. These were both so good. I had no idea where we were headed.

Linda. Masterful.

Edward. We were there.

And now I need to go to confession.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

What a wonderful compliment! Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it! 😁

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

I’m in love with Linda’s piece, it’s so multifaceted.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Edward is the master! I am not worthy! 😊

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Your piece completely obliterated mine, lol.

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

What an epic duet. Beautiful work guys 💜✨

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Thank you so much for appreciating my/our work! So glad you enjoyed it!

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Edward Swafford's avatar

Thank you so much, Muse!!!

I have an EPIC image for your piece on Wednesday ^_^.

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Trust you to pick something grand! Btw i’ve been dying of embarrassment from recording that audio. 🤣🤭 I don’t know how you do it.

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

I’m used to it, I’ve been doing it for over a year.

I’m recording vid readings starting next week to replace the audio readings, I’ll probably be embarrassed as helllllll.

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

I do the occasional video reading when the spirit leads. Looking forward to see your videos. You’ll be amazing as always 💜✨

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

I have to see these!!!

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Jill Eng's avatar

Wow. You two!! What a perfect combination of poems. Sweet 14-year-olds. In your private worlds. Different contexts. Same theme. Fascinating juxtaposition. A beautiful collaborative work.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Thank you so much! So glad you like it!

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Quite a contrast, yet the thread is there! Thank you, sweet Jill!

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Janaka Stagnaro's avatar

Powerful pieces. Well done, both of you. Touching on taboo that shouldn't be. Shame is such a prison.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Thank you for your kindness! Very much appreciated. 😊

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Linda’s is so visceral, I’m in love with her poem.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Edward is the true master! I am so fortunate for having met him/BCP! 😁

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

I am speechless! 😊❤️

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Janaka Stagnaro's avatar

Certainly. I almost stopped thinking she was being raped by her father. Very intense, but such is shame over the exploration and enjoyment of our bodies. Cum what may:)

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Samantha Lazar's avatar

Yes yes! Both powerful stunners right there. Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Linda Kowalchek's avatar

Thank you so much! So glad it spoke to you! 😊

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Thank you so much, dear Samantha ^_^.

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