Thank you so much for reading and analyzing my work. You have such an elevated grasp of literature, it is truly an honour to be read by you Annie! The image selection is all Edward after considering my original choice and my poem/recording. He is very talented with the editorial side of all of this. I am blessed to be working alongside him. One Love!!
Glad to help scratch your brain. I was very pleased with how it turned out when I decided I wanted to use the phrase "vices versus" after writing "vice versa".
I can't meditate, it's a personality...brain..flaw? Now I'm rethinking my whole life.
I love this stanza in particular - the image of the morning fold…
“it's vices versus this restlessness,
sober ruminations so dark and cold
like metal on the foggy morning fold,
where darkness meets the rising sun; “
Thanks Zivah!!! :)
vice versa --> vices versus is a nice maneuver
as well as sand grains transmogrifying into boulders in dream time
oh, and the photo with water and fetishes - so elemental
Thank you so much for reading and analyzing my work. You have such an elevated grasp of literature, it is truly an honour to be read by you Annie! The image selection is all Edward after considering my original choice and my poem/recording. He is very talented with the editorial side of all of this. I am blessed to be working alongside him. One Love!!
Love the rhythm and your wordsmithing. Very nice. And I love the your voice recording. Super smooth.
One Love SylviA!! Thanks for listening and reading. Thanks for being a part of the BCP community too!
“Vice Versa” to “vices versus” scratches my brain just right
Glad to help scratch your brain. I was very pleased with how it turned out when I decided I wanted to use the phrase "vices versus" after writing "vice versa".
So flowy!!
<3
Stellar job on the voice-over. So ambient.
Thank you Pix, I am really stoked you and others enjoy the audio. I love producing and the community is helping me have a reason to practice it.
i love the ambient background sounds
Glad you like the audio... Thanks for being part of the BCP community!
Such a cool, understated exploration of the SELF in buh-bye dreamland.
Super dooper spesh 🌪🖤
<3 Love ya, Swaff man.