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Marcia Abboud's avatar

The audio delivers your words so prolifically, dear Edward. Stunning as always! Too bad I can't highlight every line ;) 🖤

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B.R. Shenoy's avatar

Brilliant work as always, Edward! Your poetry is unparalleled—truly one of a kind.

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Thank you so much!!

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Misbah Sheikhh's avatar

Powerful work, Edward! The piece's intensity beautifully mirrors the chaos of desire, deception, and the darker truths we often overlook.

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Thank you, dear Misbah!

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Bella Smith's avatar

This like a puzzle, with layers of meaning to unravel.😁❤❤

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Ha, it is, thank you for the kudos, dear Bella.

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E.R. Davis's avatar

I just listened to the audio in the bathtub and between the powerful words and the bathroom acoustic...if you have not had this experience, you have not lived.

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

HAHA, it would sound better with bathroom acoustics.

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Kylie's avatar

Wow, Edward. Beautifully penned, this is powerful. You have such sublime talent my friend.

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

Welcome to Suuuuuuuuuuubstack

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