Love, Love the form—the sensuality, the dichotomy and oh the irony—sprinkle in the delicious word pairings. And top it with an amazing image. that makes the poetry pop. So you. Doing you.
Your voice brings it all to life, Edward. I want to hear every poem you create. Nothing less will do. Sun signs of the tectonic times... what a line! 🤍🖤
This was something else. This was like the poem that will be someone's favorite poem in a dogeared book they paid more than they could afford to spend at an upscale flea market but did it anyway because it was a first print edition and those are impossible to find.
Love, Love the form—the sensuality, the dichotomy and oh the irony—sprinkle in the delicious word pairings. And top it with an amazing image. that makes the poetry pop. So you. Doing you.
<3 sharing with us.
I think my cherry-flavored ego just popped after reading your kind words ⚡️⚡️⚡️.
Thanking you from the bottom of my blackened heart.
Subscribed!
Wow, thank you! 🥹🥹
Bravo my friend 👏🏾 (I still have yet to read as I’m still learning the flow of substack 😅)
Dawg you crazee, learn dat flow.
Your voice brings it all to life, Edward. I want to hear every poem you create. Nothing less will do. Sun signs of the tectonic times... what a line! 🤍🖤
I use too many “S” sounding words, I go into auto-lisp mode 😂😂.
It’s not my fault, half of the best words have an “S” assonance/start with S 🤷🏻♂️🖤
Quite the impressive flexing of your vast lexicon. :)
It’s just how I write, not a flex 😂😂🥰🥰🍦
I just love "semiotic lust" - I can't stop staying it out loud
😂😂 It does roll off the tongue 🖤🖤
This was something else. This was like the poem that will be someone's favorite poem in a dogeared book they paid more than they could afford to spend at an upscale flea market but did it anyway because it was a first print edition and those are impossible to find.
Thanking you dearly, dear.
I found tattered scraps of it from a flea market and pieced it together with some minor edits 🙏.
Silly I meant it was a future classic. But if you have a DeLorean and are going to flea markets in the future pick me up something cool.
Wow.... this is something else! Great work, Edward! Love everything here esp the linguistic references. Brilliant!
Thank you! Signs and syntax are so intriguing.
It is well!! You mentioned my degree as well there lol
Semiotics?
philology
I listened to this piece...it's beautifully written!
Thank you so much, Queen Ann.
And we thank you for the paid sub!! I’ve got two mouths to feed in the form of Joziah and Hazza 👶👶.
Queen Ann! Lol…..
You're killing me with your formatting prowess.
🎶 Killing Debdutta softly, with this for-mat-ting (song) a ong a ong 🎶