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Existential World's avatar

Vanity is a scary sin. Excellent Edward

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Marcia Abboud's avatar

Love this! It imprints deeper with that voice that melts hearts 🤍🖤

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Edward Swafford's avatar

As long as it’s the heart of men, many men.

Many, many, men.

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Marcia Abboud's avatar

Hahaha. Absolutely.

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H. R. Sinclair's avatar

He never misses. He just... NEVER misses. How?! The people need to know.

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Black Coffee Poetry's avatar

He was born with it.

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Jozef Cain's avatar

Your style is unmatched. This poem encapsulated vanity to the max.

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Edward Swafford's avatar

I'm bottling you for forever use.

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Debdutta Pal's avatar

I feel better about my staring contest with the mirror now.

Sinning is definitely the new black. 😈

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Edward Swafford's avatar

You would outshine any mirror.

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Shayne Buchwald-Nickoles's avatar

Beautiful.

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Edward Swafford's avatar

Thank you!

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Vibes: Black Mirror meets Lady Macbeth meets Euphoria.

Great piece as always!

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Edward Swafford's avatar

Euphoria is bliss ^_^.

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Mark Armstrong's avatar

I could really identify with "my manifold mystique." 👍😅

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Edward Swafford's avatar

Me threeeeeeee.

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Samantha Lazar's avatar

Yes, but did you look at me? Another stunner, Edward!

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Edward Swafford's avatar

You are an oil painting of the vainglorious, dear Samantha ^_^.

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Wow Edward!! Beautifully crafted.

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Edward Swafford's avatar

Thank you so much, Rea! ^_^

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